Emily - A Level Media

Link to my final website: https://ebiggins08.wixsite.com/charliemusic

The changes to website include: add in more images of my artist that are of different angles add small cartoon hearts to my biography, to attract the target audience in my biography, I need to incorporate something about the unusual relationship between old and young in my AV content, I need to add an end slide that asks the audience to get involved

The changes I made to my music video include: change the shots where my performer is static - new shot is him getting ready intercut footage of him messaging his mates, done via a close up, this will encourage the faster paced editing in the last half of the video, I will add more footage of them having fun, e.g. looking through photos and videos  Also, when coming to the end of the editing process, I realised I needed to define/differentiate the two characters, and show how at the end they come together as friends. I have done this by putting two separate filters on their solo shots, but clips towards the end show both of them in the same filter signifying their unique friendship. 

Website 1st draft Feedback in the new music banner, I need to use the space on the right hand side for fun cartoon imagery e.g. hearts. I will also add this to the side of the biography. I also need to vary my photos as they are practically all the same distance and similar angles. I will take some more in 'music' poses. at the end of the AV content I will add a screen with text which asks the audience to tweet their essentials there is nothing in my website that links to the unusual narrative of the video, so I will add to the biography something about the unusual representation into the mainstream in my statement of intent I talked about the guitar image in my company logo, something which needs to be added to my website.

Link to first draft: https://youtu.be/-EejgalVY8k This is my feedback looking back at my first draft At 0:10 the clip is too static, so I will reshoot the clip and include him getting ready. Plus, I will make it clear he would rather choose to spend time with her.  Performance shots need Ken Burns effect to give it movement. (Unable to do as editing software I am using doesn’t have it) At 0:46 the walking section will include him texting his mates who send him immature messages, to further emphasise the narrative. During the long performance shots, such as 0:51, it will be intercut with him writing about his new best friend. This footage will be sped up.  During the last half of the video as not a lot happens, I will intercut new footage of him ‘choosing her’, by cutting between pictures of them and cancelling messages and calls from his usual mates.