Feedback on 1st draft of website

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Website 1st draft








Feedback
  • in the new music banner, I need to use the space on the right hand side for fun cartoon imagery e.g. hearts. I will also add this to the side of the biography.
  • I also need to vary my photos as they are practically all the same distance and similar angles. I will take some more in 'music' poses.
  • at the end of the AV content I will add a screen with text which asks the audience to tweet their essentials
  • there is nothing in my website that links to the unusual narrative of the video, so I will add to the biography something about the unusual representation into the mainstream
  • in my statement of intent I talked about the guitar image in my company logo, something which needs to be added to my website.

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